Posted by admin | Posted in trees,shrubs | Posted on 13-05-2011
Tags: christmas trees scotch pines
Help Me! Is this Christmas Card Material?? Please Help?
I created this and I was wondering is this something that you would expect to find in a Christmas card? What do you think of it? I am trying to get into this writing production that will help me better my writing and I am submitting this as my entry for the Christmas card writing challenge. What areas do you think need work? Does it make sense??
Melodic carols, glistening snow,
all help the Christmas season to glow,
Scotch pine trees, picturesque vivid array of Christmas lights, all assist in making the Christmas season bright, but a mere touch of hugs, a tender kiss of love, kindness and generosity amidst, and to add dazzle, a sprinkle of magic, creates the perfect recipe for a Christmas season flamboyant in its beauty, lively, and fantastic
Merry Christmas
P.S. My main focus is this: “picturesque vivid array of Christmas lights”
Thank You : )
it’s a little much for a card…
usually a card is 2 or 3 lines, and it’s something simple but catchy.
your piece is nice and descriptive, but some of the wording was so heavy that I had a hard time picturing what you were trying to put out there.
plus you have some grammar issues.
shorten it up, summarize what you want to say instead of writing a paragraph.
good luck!
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